light green do not understand ground floor/ sports/ courtyard - how does that work in city context? maybe to be moved up? cannot relate concept models to cardboardmodel to drawings - sections needed - please put your name, not a number
After our discussion on Thursday I think that this can be turned into a successful building - needs far more clarity, and work, but the current conceptual basis of the project is acceptable (because I know it) but needs to be made far clearer. Guy
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ReplyDeletedo not understand ground floor/ sports/ courtyard - how does that work in city context? maybe to be moved up? cannot relate concept models to cardboardmodel to drawings - sections needed - please put your name, not a number
Light green too,
ReplyDeleteAfter our discussion on Thursday I think that this can be turned into a successful building - needs far more clarity, and work, but the current conceptual basis of the project is acceptable (because I know it) but needs to be made far clearer.
Guy